a beautiful swim

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sweetwater
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a beautiful swim

Post by sweetwater » March 9th, 2014, 9:27 am

the sun wakes
to remember
the languaging
of morning

the day perceives
itself
in the context
of mind

perceiving itself

there to witness
the happenings
and circumstance

by which we invent
a personality

that deems itself
as vulnerable

or incapable

and what prevents
the mind

from perceiving itself
as pure experience

the tree determines
the attributes and context

not only by how high you can climb
but the height from which

you jump into
what some might say

'freedom'

(hopefully into a lake and a beautiful swim thereafter)

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dadio
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Re: a beautiful swim

Post by dadio » March 10th, 2014, 4:25 am

Excellently put. 8)

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