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saw
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so duh

Post by saw » March 6th, 2014, 5:37 pm

the hoi polloi of a Dr. Pepper
is status quo to the man sipping his Mountain Dew
flaunting his conspicuous carbonation

he is oblivious to the spoon-bending mentalist
hiding behind the curtain whose purpose in life
revolves on his ability to convince millions of tongues

that the softness of his drink is a matter of legacy
a statement to the world , that deep down in his guts
soda can ferment into a Puccini opera, a cause celeb

for the aimless zombies of the Red Bull generation....
a sage sits cross-legged on the side of a Nepalese mountain
smiling smugly sipping his Nehi in the sun for no one to see

he is content

immersed in bubbly enlightenment

he knows the power of the transcendental grape and the euphoric orange
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: so duh

Post by creativesoul » March 6th, 2014, 5:46 pm

this rocks me
my lil roomie is always trying to get me to drink izzy- which- is kind of boring- but no sugar- i love this piece---
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Re: so duh

Post by dadio » March 11th, 2014, 8:30 am

Captured well; enjoyed 8)

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