white picket fences

[creativesoul]

my new life
has no fences pushing u from a lawn
that would need a machine to take care of
or a man
because we know how reliable that can be
like ranch hands
it is never really clear
who is working for whom

always liked the bull riders
i want to get drunk and ride one of those

but i dont drink
huh?
well those white picket fences were protruding from my heart
houses in my viens
electric bills like a tatoo
cable and all the blues
no white picket fences
i know that love has too have a place to live
can it have maid service?

like jesus
the holes in my wrists
were painful
my womb delivered
the train pulled in and out
four times
i was late
staring off into somewhere else=
dare i go?
i missed it altogether

[saw]

very moving jana.......bittersweet write

[creativesoul]

Thanks- I guess I feel moved enough to set up the painting area- then check my e- mail- like ray Bradbury - and each tattoo comes to life-why do the spiritd help us! To enter thise houses! With blood on thier hands dripping guns and metal objects!
$ $ $ $ @ !
White picket fences that cage
That which never belonged to me
Gardens and vegetables
White picket fence relations

[creativesoul]

Air
Clouds
Freedom

[stilltrucking]

I try not to comment on art, because I don't know jack shit about it, just that old cliche— I know what's eyes likes.
I like that very much
thanks for letting me see it,

10-4

bitter sweet yes like a Bobby Bare song

I found me a woman as warm as the sunshine took her a year to slip out of her dress
She talk about havin' a little rose covered cottage
But roses cost money and you know the rest
So open the gates up...
Yes I'm back home in Huntsville again

[creativesoul]

today the white
of the fence
is like rancid oil
frying chicken
in a greasy lunch wagon
that whole meal
of america stuck in my throat

jobs that do not really pay
you gave me up
now stay away