RIP EM

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creativesoul
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RIP EM

Post by creativesoul » April 14th, 2014, 3:40 pm

he smiled from ear to ear
spoke poems with his lips
lust with his hips
he wasnt a lazy men
women liked him
cept for that temper


the skillet was the first womans murder weapn
told everybody
he fell off the horse
yep
he sure the fuck did
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: RIP EM

Post by david » April 17th, 2014, 10:44 am

LOVED IT! Last 4 lines were fab, brought a smile this did....D

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Re: RIP EM

Post by Steve Plonk » April 17th, 2014, 11:38 am

Creativesoul, Loved that graveyard humor in this verse. :lol: 8)

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Re: RIP EM

Post by dadio » April 18th, 2014, 2:09 am

Well said. 8)

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Re: RIP EM

Post by creativesoul » April 18th, 2014, 5:18 am

Thanku,,,,,
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: RIP EM

Post by creativesoul » April 21st, 2014, 8:45 pm

It is a measure 11 crime state here - best to read non - violent communication and hope for the best
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