naked that morning

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the mingo
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naked that morning

Post by the mingo » April 26th, 2014, 7:17 am

after I saw her naked that morning
I dug a trench clear across one hundred year old WW1 battlefields
I thought about clothes
I thought about the Salvation Army
I thought rag bins
I thought Africa
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: naked that morning

Post by Lostwire » April 26th, 2014, 9:14 am

Saw African Queen last night...they were plowing African river dodging WW one. Nice poem mingo.
Jam on me!!!

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Re: naked that morning

Post by the mingo » April 26th, 2014, 11:46 am

Thx, Mark
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: naked that morning

Post by creativesoul » April 27th, 2014, 6:05 am

I thought about the times
When I was not hungry
When I laughed
Being. Simple

I thought about the places I used to go-

The way you show me how to shine
In the darki
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: naked that morning

Post by the mingo » April 27th, 2014, 11:01 am

Jana - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: naked that morning

Post by creativesoul » April 28th, 2014, 12:50 pm

Jam?
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: naked that morning

Post by the mingo » April 28th, 2014, 3:41 pm

we can do that 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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