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creativesoul
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no juice

Post by creativesoul » May 17th, 2014, 11:26 pm

maybe the things
that i loved the most
gave my heart and soul
just havent got no juice
for it anymore

but i loved him

going to austrailia
maybe matey
i will find that longed for love
i wanted so badly


it wasnt my fault
that you didnt know
the secrets of loving a real woman
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Re: no juice

Post by dadio » May 28th, 2014, 3:13 pm

8) Fine work.

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Re: no juice

Post by saw » May 29th, 2014, 2:09 pm

so much locked up inside the human mind
cant always read a book by its cover
and even when we read the book
our interpretations are not the same .... 8)
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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Re: no juice

Post by creativesoul » May 29th, 2014, 10:15 pm

Xxxx
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: no juice

Post by justwalt » June 1st, 2014, 2:14 am

I'm not so sure... men... call it love

I call it... lucky

tks

w
many is a word

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Re: no juice

Post by WIREMAN » June 1st, 2014, 11:56 am

There comes a time when the spirit asks, " why even try?"
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: no juice

Post by creativesoul » June 15th, 2014, 3:55 am

Could be the intigue 8)
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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