blinded by eyeless windows

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blinded by eyeless windows

Post by wylde » August 1st, 2014, 4:44 am

Image



wounded retinas seep
bound darkly in dank
mussed cocoon threads

monotone monochromes

pearlescent moth eggs shimmer
iced
in cavernous boweled shadowed slips
dried in the taint
staining
empty leers

on hollow walls

bricked on cobble stoned streets
washing
multiplicity
grey upon grey
swallowed

blinded by eyeless windows

looking in looking out

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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by mnaz » August 1st, 2014, 8:44 am

wylde! man, how ya been?

yes, too many wounded retinas. way too many.. i miss hangin' out on the DOS board at Volkov Cafe (formerly, AC ...)

okay, yeah, a cheap shot . . . but hey, you know ...

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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by wylde » August 1st, 2014, 9:07 am

strong like a Russian. putin stuff here putin stuff there lol.

yer no miss volkov café. but look forward to being around here a bits....

bests 2u.
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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by whoaisme » August 1st, 2014, 12:45 pm

wounded retinas...damn man that's crazy!

really enjoyed this as it seems not one word is misplaced.

bravo!
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia

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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by justwalt » August 1st, 2014, 5:51 pm

wylde eyes
wylde read
wylde surprise
many is a word

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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by WIREMAN » August 2nd, 2014, 4:22 am

enjoyed the walk on the wylde side.....good to see ur writing again 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by judih » August 2nd, 2014, 6:59 am

the wylde has landed
new blooms in town

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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by wylde » August 4th, 2014, 3:58 am

whoaisme wrote:wounded retinas...damn man that's crazy!

really enjoyed this as it seems not one word is misplaced.

bravo!

whoaisme - kind regards to you for your deemed appreciation.

Image
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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by wylde » August 4th, 2014, 3:59 am

justwalt wrote:wylde eyes
wylde read
wylde surprise
as john oft said.

the w3rd.peace n love bro
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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by wylde » August 4th, 2014, 4:00 am

WIREMAN wrote:enjoyed the walk on the wylde side.....good to see ur writing again 8)
the velvet underground has a way of wiring you up...a certain way

thankxxx
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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by wylde » August 4th, 2014, 4:02 am

judih wrote:the wylde has landed
new blooms in town

I shower you in petals filled with humility and ask for you for your forgiveness.

passion sometimes gnashes when rather subdued.
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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by wylde » August 4th, 2014, 4:04 am

mnaz wrote:wylde! man, how ya been?

yes, too many wounded retinas. way too many.. i miss hangin' out on the DOS board at Volkov Cafe (formerly, AC ...)

okay, yeah, a cheap shot . . . but hey, you know ...

ps. I assume you remain the rock man!
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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by judih » August 4th, 2014, 7:23 am

wylde wrote:
judih wrote:the wylde has landed
new blooms in town

I shower you in petals filled with humility and ask for you for your forgiveness.

passion sometimes gnashes when rather subdued.
thnx for the petals
love petal showers
hearts lighten

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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by goldenmyst » August 4th, 2014, 11:31 am

The eyeless window seeps light into retinal raisin. Wylde you are forever the maestro poet of surreal masterpieces. How wonderful to see you again.

Shalom,
John

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Re: blinded by eyeless windows

Post by wylde » August 5th, 2014, 6:55 am

goldenmyst wrote:The eyeless window seeps light into retinal raisin. Wylde you are forever the maestro poet of surreal masterpieces. How wonderful to see you again.

Shalom,
John
john. salute brother. I hope life is being good to you.
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