Tire trouble

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creativesoul
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Tire trouble

Post by creativesoul » August 26th, 2014, 4:28 pm

Recently
I fell asleep
While driving
Ended up in the bushes
Man came along
Changed my tire
And smoked me out
And I went home
Shook up
Still alive
Now 88 $ later
A new tire
25000 mile tune up
But it scared me
Now I am moving to the city
Bike everywhere!
No more falling asleep at the wheel
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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WIREMAN
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Re: Tire trouble

Post by WIREMAN » August 26th, 2014, 7:15 pm

i did away with the car thing
4 1/2 years ago
just sick of the cost
living in town i get by
i think the insurance eats at me the most
like giving your money away
with nothing in return
and dont get pulled over
theyll treat u like a criminal
ugh, i make it getting rides
riding trains and buses
an a occasional cab ride
when in a desperate spot
but im surviving
and i lost the car worry...
nice flow here creative soul
i like a poem when it gets to the point
and this sure did... 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Tire trouble

Post by the mingo » August 27th, 2014, 3:33 am

bike? Hell yeah, MONGOLIA! 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Tire trouble

Post by creativesoul » August 27th, 2014, 11:00 am

portland i th 2nd greenest city in the world
my sons are like 'yeah mom, just ride your bike'
mongolia- this old lady thing is a kick
never thought i would make it this far
old hippie
artist
sick
and they love me anyway
kept my mouth shut
when things went a bit nuts
now i love like
once before to adore
all the things
that are in store-
yyou betcha mongolia
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Tire trouble

Post by saw » August 29th, 2014, 12:04 pm

livin in the city does have its advantages....thankful you are OK....sometimes we have these close calls in our life, that are meant to stir us into action, into seeing something new,,,let's hope that's how it works for you....peace
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Tire trouble

Post by creativesoul » August 29th, 2014, 9:41 pm

thank you- i am thinking that portland is my city = and my island is kauai= but kauai is sometimes a bit deep for me-and i do not mean the water-- :?:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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