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izeveryboyin
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Post by izeveryboyin » March 31st, 2005, 2:24 pm

They held me there, a prisoner of poetry for 7 days.
I could no longer speak or think of reason...
Desparation in a locked cage...
Free space; no time.
In a mind of sorrow I caught the faer and ran away from dreary dark night below.
It was a quiet tale of copulation on a countertop,
Bare and naked, sweating from the effort of sex and acheivement.
We were all winded and blown from coffee and strong drink
And the movies drove us mad with a powerful lust.
We were children in the water,
Lost in translations of divine existence
The mumbles and words of lost gods and empty dreams.
Blood scattered on the women children obeying the hours
Then flowers burned us all into submission.
I was always corrupt.
Tonight we will sing in praise of dead animal farms and the desolate plain.
There no longer was a name nor hope for the worried gardener.
His wife and I were friends some solemn Sunday,
When we talked about sodomy and fornication...
When we talked about the wild horses who lie wanting and waiting in the yard.
Sleeplessness... madness...
A collection of undescribed images,
Disturbing formal minds and the eyes of screeching ravens.
But what now?
After death and copulation; sex and acheivement,
Where do we die?
Who will re-incarnate us in broken bottles and smells of old nights and beer?
Dining in a snakeskin chair with no arms... no fear
Sleeping in the car
This is the hellish nightmare.
Broken dreams, screams of time
Quiet evolution, revolutionary mind...
Crime,
And repiration, desparation in the snow.
Oh dearpoor fool lunging with loathing.
Where will you go?
Where will you go?
It's time to close the door
It's time to see the light.
Breath...
You've nothing left to die for,
A sin in blank-labeled jars.
riding around in one of those old cars.
Memories and beliefs.
We struggle with reality and die a million times in heat
Where no one saves us
And everyone is clinically insane.
It is said that at midnight, we see our visions...
We have been hidng at morning dawn,
And heinous disaster.
I wanted to be there... for just three nights
Biochemistry, and alcoholism...
It burns at my lips with thoughts of somber freedom.
It was a calm day.
Never before have we seen such glory.
It was beauty inside baked apples at 350 degrees.
I was running from the mirror, and chasing dreams.
Seems that life finally has meaning,
And I am filled with it all.
flooded in certain areas.
It ignites my eyes...
I think that I might be inspired....
The dog upon the leash was hired,
And my assistant there was fired
Who knew my hotel room was wired.
sometimes I just like to breathe.

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Post by Lightning Rod » April 1st, 2005, 12:05 am

kayla,

You blow me away
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by stilltrucking » April 1st, 2005, 7:54 am

it is about a hour to dawn and I am sitting around the campire with japhy riyer
http://www.rooknet.com/beatpage/writers/snyder.html
“I go to meet it at the
Edge of the light”
and thinking about midnight nightmares revealed at dawn
Kyla it is too 8) for words of praise. just a my ramble, ignited by your inspiration and fire
8)

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Post by Arcadia » April 1st, 2005, 12:44 pm

wow!

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Post by izeveryboyin » April 1st, 2005, 3:05 pm

thanks for reading guys. LRod... to blow you away is a far better thing I do than to knock you down. *wink* i love ur guts!!! st, snyder was a great influence of the beat and an amazing authority on eastern culture, language and religion, if you were seriously sitting around a campfire with him, or just reading one of his books, that's fucking excellent!! Arcadia... thanks. Those one-word responses rock!

--k

p.s st, though you're great... you totally forgot the A in my name.. and I get so neurotic about that b/c for some reason, despite the A's apparent prescense in my name, it is often disregarded and peopel call me "kyla". I hae it. Anything but that. ANYTHING! *goes into hysterics*
sometimes I just like to breathe.

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Post by mnaz » April 2nd, 2005, 3:13 pm

"And everyone is clinically insane"....



I think you're onto something here....


Nice lurching read, ize...

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Post by izeveryboyin » April 5th, 2005, 1:48 pm

thanks naz. Always a pleasure giving you something to mentally munch on.

--k
sometimes I just like to breathe.

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