last time Rose

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the mingo
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last time Rose

Post by the mingo » November 5th, 2014, 12:23 pm

the damp phone swells
in searching call
in eggshell sunlight the undone bridegroom
my last time Rose nervous with goodbye
quivering in wind
serious skyline along the belt path
bending in a mute pose
uncertainties rack the evangelist
the river refuses conviction
the gathered bones of haiku
show through
one last clever uninnocent shared joint
smoked behind the church
the bride's tresses are mussed
the unseen hands of destiny
are just as sure
as any that are visible
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: last time Rose

Post by revolutionR » November 5th, 2014, 3:03 pm

a meditation on the bride
as a symbol for for the marriage of heaven and hell
or to put it more bluntly, doth the bride blush?

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Re: last time Rose

Post by the mingo » November 6th, 2014, 2:48 am

sexual flush is more like it - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: last time Rose

Post by WIREMAN » November 6th, 2014, 8:31 pm

brides stripped bare....by the batchelors......
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: last time Rose

Post by the mingo » November 6th, 2014, 10:19 pm

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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