Damn these cookies are hard

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WIREMAN
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Damn these cookies are hard

Post by WIREMAN » November 26th, 2014, 10:41 pm

I want my food to make
me say "yum!"
every forkfull eliciting
blissfull "yums!"
there's too much middle
of the road here on
the plate
what do i gotta do
go to mexico for
a real taco?
& these cookies
you buy em tonight
then by the morning
they're too damn hard
these cookies are just
too damn hard!
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Damn these cookies are hard

Post by the mingo » November 27th, 2014, 8:19 am

Yeah! we've been rooked ! 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Damn these cookies are hard

Post by saw » November 27th, 2014, 2:03 pm

yeah, hardness abounds...lets start a commune mark...soften the edges a little with camaraderie and laughter for all the new challenges that come in the night....

dunk those cookies in some hot chocolate
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Re: Damn these cookies are hard

Post by mtmynd » November 27th, 2014, 6:58 pm

taco shells too crispy,
breaking in half, spilling
contents all over the plate
eliciting gawkers at the next table

order a fucking cookie
that break apart, stale!
and it's too late to dunk
besides it'd break apart
in the hot chocolate and
turn it into a kids gumbo

where's the mercy when I
hunger for the best of cuisine
and end up on a side street
nightmare of food from last month
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Re: Damn these cookies are hard

Post by WIREMAN » November 27th, 2014, 11:04 pm

under the yum-yum tree, i'll make my stand.....thanks for reading and taking the time to respond steve, mingo, & cecil :D
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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