I'll Write It Slowly, SO As Not TO BOre YOu

Post by **izeveryboyin** » April 5th, 2005, 6:19 pm

Gibberish, madness,
Wanton sex goddess
Pallad and bleeding
Moaning... darkness...
FEAR
Homosexuality in a trunk
Monkey in morning newspapers
Cars will roll by, Bessy is high
Invaribly I, Fuck over and die.

hester_prynne · Post by **hester_prynne** » April 5th, 2005, 6:30 pm

Indeed Iz, pillowtalk ain't always what it's cracked up to be eh?

I enjoyed this, the way it gracefully winds down and sputters into rhyme.
I know the feeling well.
You capture it nicely.....
H

Post by **izeveryboyin** » April 6th, 2005, 7:53 pm

hey thanks... appreaciate your appreciation!!
--k

Post by **WIREMAN** » April 6th, 2005, 8:04 pm

I'm diggin it Iz......thinkin bout that noise as the cars and trucks rolled past today and me with an aching hangover head on....was fun earnin it tho.....

Post by **izeveryboyin** » April 7th, 2005, 1:14 pm

hangover head... such a great play on words. (was it intended?)
--k

Post by **WIREMAN** » April 7th, 2005, 2:59 pm

Ya know I am a very serious writer Iz....don't cha...hell yeah I had a hangover head on............how's life on the front lines????????

Post by **izeveryboyin** » April 8th, 2005, 12:22 pm

I don't know... I was napping when they took position.

--k

Post by **jimboloco** » April 18th, 2005, 10:41 am

Where do she come out with this harmonious discontent?
It makes tension and drama slide like sweet steamed okra
right down my gullet, I could suck her in that way.

She carries a sensuality that an old man craves. Yup!

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