WHATEVER HER NAME 1975.
WHATEVER HER NAME 1975.
And I suppose
she just happened
to be looking this way?
Netanya said
just happened
to be catching
your eyes
and she just happened
to be wearing
that darn skimpy bikini
so that you
could see nigh on
her backside
and what she had
for dinner?
I sat outside
the five berth caravan
on the camping site
a book in my hand
(Sartre most probably)
trying to focus
on the words
I was just sitting here
and she came out
of her van
and stood there
sunning herself
nothing to me
what she does
I said
O so the sight
of a bitch
nigh on undressed
does nothing for you?
O now isn't that
a new thing
maybe I just ring
the newspapers
and tell them
the news
Benedict has lost
his eyes for darn bitches
semi-undressed
huh? huh?
I looked over
at the sun coming
over the hedge
bright and brave
tried to let her words
float over me
like a bad smell
but still she went on
bet if truth were known
you've been praying
for her to get her butt
out here so you can gawk
nothing would
surprise me
she said
with a shake
of her brunette head
do you want to go
for a swim?
I asked
putting down
the book
Where's the kids?
Down at the beach
doing what kids do
darn swim
or make sandcastles
or look for dead
fish or crabs
she replied
or we could go in
and make love
on the bed
I said
she looked
at the woman
over the way
in her bikini
bright yellow
and quite skimpy
sitting in a deckchair
with her dyed
blonde hair
bit risky
she said
what if the kids return
and we're at it
lock the door
I said
she smiled
never thought
of that before
so we went
into the caravan
and I gave
one last look
at the blonde dame
in the bright
yellow bikini
whatever her name.
she just happened
to be looking this way?
Netanya said
just happened
to be catching
your eyes
and she just happened
to be wearing
that darn skimpy bikini
so that you
could see nigh on
her backside
and what she had
for dinner?
I sat outside
the five berth caravan
on the camping site
a book in my hand
(Sartre most probably)
trying to focus
on the words
I was just sitting here
and she came out
of her van
and stood there
sunning herself
nothing to me
what she does
I said
O so the sight
of a bitch
nigh on undressed
does nothing for you?
O now isn't that
a new thing
maybe I just ring
the newspapers
and tell them
the news
Benedict has lost
his eyes for darn bitches
semi-undressed
huh? huh?
I looked over
at the sun coming
over the hedge
bright and brave
tried to let her words
float over me
like a bad smell
but still she went on
bet if truth were known
you've been praying
for her to get her butt
out here so you can gawk
nothing would
surprise me
she said
with a shake
of her brunette head
do you want to go
for a swim?
I asked
putting down
the book
Where's the kids?
Down at the beach
doing what kids do
darn swim
or make sandcastles
or look for dead
fish or crabs
she replied
or we could go in
and make love
on the bed
I said
she looked
at the woman
over the way
in her bikini
bright yellow
and quite skimpy
sitting in a deckchair
with her dyed
blonde hair
bit risky
she said
what if the kids return
and we're at it
lock the door
I said
she smiled
never thought
of that before
so we went
into the caravan
and I gave
one last look
at the blonde dame
in the bright
yellow bikini
whatever her name.
Re: WHATEVER HER NAME 1975.

Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: WHATEVER HER NAME 1975.
makes me wanna go to the beach....love to take a beautiful woman in a bikini, there's nothing like watching a goddess frolick in the surf to stir all our imaginings... 

me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
Re: WHATEVER HER NAME 1975.
I enjoy reading your stuff. Line breaks keep a reader on pins and needles.
I loved 1975. What a year.
68degrees
I loved 1975. What a year.
68degrees
Re: WHATEVER HER NAME 1975.
"she wore an itsy bitsy tenney weeny yellow polka dot bikini "
Brian Hyland
well done dadio
quite a summer of love tale
Brian Hyland
well done dadio
quite a summer of love tale
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
Re: WHATEVER HER NAME 1975.
Thank you, all. 

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Re: WHATEVER HER NAME 1975.
you're a master of narrative poetry, Terry ... what visions you create!
Re: WHATEVER HER NAME 1975.
Thank you, Doreen 

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