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the mingo
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specifying a subject

Post by the mingo » March 15th, 2015, 7:35 am

swamps under snow
slack scratch smacked the tax
hatch opens - out jumps a patch
the grocers of poland go polar shoulder to shoulder
ocean motion
the zone is our hostess
nobody's ever seen the owner
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by shadowplay » March 15th, 2015, 12:38 pm

marv poem
agreed with Ton about the tongue feat being maybe cumbersome
and best line...yow

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