Waiting for Love

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Waiting for Love

Post by 68degrees » March 19th, 2015, 10:19 pm

Only the curious
or the damaged
wait for butterflies
among the brambles
in a field of bricks

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Re: Waiting for Love

Post by judih » March 19th, 2015, 11:20 pm

magic happens
between the crumbles
and the jagged

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Re: Waiting for Love

Post by 68degrees » March 20th, 2015, 7:11 am

Same for poets, I guess. The waiting, I mean. Thanks for the comment, Judith.

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Re: Waiting for Love

Post by saw » March 20th, 2015, 7:11 am

I think I am both...curious AND damaged....nice economy
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Waiting for Love

Post by 68degrees » March 20th, 2015, 8:32 pm

Ton: Other comments have me thinking it should be "and" ;) even though I still like either /or...what to do?

Saw / Judith: Thanks. As always.

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