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Re: walls

Post by whoaisme » March 25th, 2015, 3:12 pm

the rhyming kinda bores me.

nothing about it here, specifically, i just tend to dislike most rhyming.

i did love these line:

"Trust is not easy for this lonely flesh,
I felt what was true before it left."

and

"My walls built to protect and save,
are now blocking love for my heart."

well done sir wesdan keep at it!
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia
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