Like a snowstorm upon a mountain top

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m.n.i.w
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Like a snowstorm upon a mountain top

Post by m.n.i.w » April 15th, 2015, 1:51 am

It feels like a snowstorm upon a mountain top.
You call out to no one,
but your calls still echo
until you're engulfed in your own bitterness.
You grow numb and resent everything until your mind is blank.
The sun doesn't shine.
It just laughs at you, trolling your life.
Fooling you into thinking that light will ever come your way again.
The darkness becomes your light
and your world become bittersweet and dim.
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Re: Like a snowstorm upon a mountain top by m.n.i.w

Post by Doreen Peri » April 15th, 2015, 8:50 am

Yeah, that can happen, sadly enough. But as they say, things things too shall pass. Those down times always turn around and the sun smiles on you again.

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Re: Like a snowstorm upon a mountain top by m.n.i.w

Post by saw » April 16th, 2015, 7:52 am

Best way, in my opinion to weather the storms, is to write your way out ...to the other side

so you are on your way....we've all been to these dark places where it seems the sun will never shine again.....where the snow will never stop.....then one day, we wake up, and the sun is shining in our window.....look for that rainbow

welcome to S8......write on !
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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