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Doreen Peri
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Watch what you ask for!

Post by Doreen Peri » June 13th, 2015, 4:29 pm

Watch what you ask for, they say,
'cause you might actually get it some day
and lord knows it could be more than you
can take, so wake the fuck up and pay attention —
Every thought you think can be a new invention.
You create your own world, furled
into space, desire can erase the past with a trace of
imagination and then may come a whirlwind spin
between elation and confusion. Truer words not ever
spoken, so take these words as a token of my heart
which is ripped apart, spilled down the page, stabbed
and bled, fed with love nutrition, bliss and the agony
of more more more more more more more so
please please please watch what you ask for
and don't forget it, 'cause baby, you might just
get it!

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Re: Watch what you ask for!

Post by Tjflowers80 » June 18th, 2015, 1:19 pm

Right there with you moose
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

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Re: Watch what you ask for!

Post by judih » June 18th, 2015, 10:22 pm

the ask comes uninvited
the receive slowly revealed
did i ask? i must've...
here i am, transformed

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Re: Watch what you ask for!

Post by Arcadia » June 18th, 2015, 11:40 pm

:shock: yeah..., does it also apply for:

"whatch what you reject..." it´s shouting aloud here (my here) lately... :roll: :lol:

gracias for the poem, Doreen! :)

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Post by the mingo » June 20th, 2015, 8:16 am

OMG! Don't do that! Sour grapes? You think things are rough? God sent me a dog what drools. Try that first thing in the morning after you have put on clean jeans and the dog comes over for his pet and drools all over your pant leg while the love is being passed around. 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by WIREMAN » June 21st, 2015, 11:42 am

drink a silly sour beer and everything will be alright 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by still.trucking » July 1st, 2015, 11:06 pm

You always get what's coming: you never have to ask.
Only by the He who learns must suffer. And even in our sleep pain that cannot forget falls drop by drop upon the heart, and in our own despair, against our will, comes wisdom to us by the awful grace of God.
Aeschylus
Thinking about karma and the awful grace of God

sorry for the digression but thanks for the poem.
"Natural selection, as it has operated in human history, favors not only the clever but the murderous." Barbara Ehrenreich

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Re: Watch what you ask for!

Post by saw » July 4th, 2015, 2:13 am

I'm always somewhere between "elation and confusion", so thanx for speaking to me.... :D
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Watch what you ask for!

Post by WIREMAN » July 4th, 2015, 9:42 am

the grass aint alwayze greener.... :lol:
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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