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saw
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spinning

Post by saw » July 12th, 2015, 2:28 pm

you chose the colors
the green tranquility
deep blue contentment

you teased the feng sui
with the simplicity of your art,
the hooded female walks in solitude

in an open field, her layered cloak gray as the sky
her eyes as bottomless as the mystery undisclosed
time is ultraviolet, love is infrared

the white cowl covers her head
and you fantasize about those hidden tresses
hour after hour lying on the floor

writing poetry here
listening to jazz in this room
staring at those eyes wanting colorful answers

what color is her hair you think
why would that be important to you
why does she keep your mind eternally

spinning
oh...now I see
spinning.....is a Good thing
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

Tjflowers80
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Re: spinning

Post by Tjflowers80 » July 13th, 2015, 1:28 am

Absolutely amazing! Do you write these for someone or are they just dreams waiting for reality? I love them!
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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Re: spinning

Post by judih » July 13th, 2015, 6:23 am

Lovely

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the mingo
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Re: spinning

Post by the mingo » July 14th, 2015, 9:55 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

saw
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Re: spinning

Post by saw » July 15th, 2015, 12:04 pm

thanx y'all...and Jess in a way it is for someone....a woman in a painting
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: spinning

Post by Tjflowers80 » July 15th, 2015, 5:59 pm

Love it still!
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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