Sunday Morning ( for saw down Baltimore way )

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the mingo
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Sunday Morning ( for saw down Baltimore way )

Post by the mingo » August 30th, 2015, 11:11 am

sunday morning
listening to old swing tunes
in the kitchen playing yahtzee
the throws could be better for me
this woman i'm playing
is kicking my ass all over the scorepad
but i got food in the cupboard
a cozy bed
a big lazy dog
a roof between me
& the sky when it rains
the river is to my back
birds fly over its waters
catching their food on the wing
my location is somewhat
of a mystery to me at present
all i think i know is
i'm somewhere this side
of an afterlife
but no more quests after knowledge for me
because it's my turn to roll
i need three fives
to make the top
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Sunday Morning ( for saw down Baltimore way )

Post by saw » August 30th, 2015, 1:16 pm

oh yeah !....the good life has nothing to do with money of course, and as we age the sweet pleasures of the basics and a few creature comforts shine like the northern lights...

well done, my friend...c'mon 3 fives !

it's the same in baltimore, or anywhere on the planet... 8) ....acknowledge the good stuff
all around you...take the time....repeat it.....every day....this is what's good in my life
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Sunday Morning ( for saw down Baltimore way )

Post by theirishsea » August 30th, 2015, 1:47 pm

I like it. These poems that have coherent stories---and I relate to them----are a pleasure to read.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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Re: Sunday Morning ( for saw down Baltimore way )

Post by the mingo » August 30th, 2015, 8:03 pm

Thx saw, glad you liked it - i did get my fives but lost the round - she had a yahtzee, i didn't 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Sunday Morning ( for saw down Baltimore way )

Post by the mingo » August 30th, 2015, 8:13 pm

irish - thx, 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Sunday Morning ( for saw down Baltimore way )

Post by judih » August 30th, 2015, 11:20 pm

time to be
to play, giggle
and then bike

Lovely salute to what fills us with appreciation

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Re: Sunday Morning ( for saw down Baltimore way )

Post by the mingo » August 31st, 2015, 6:16 am

8) Thx, judih 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Sunday Morning ( for saw down Baltimore way )

Post by Tjflowers80 » September 1st, 2015, 12:23 am

Fantastic! I remember when my family and I used to play. Such a vivid encounter. I love it!
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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