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the mingo
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Hitchhiker

Post by the mingo » September 5th, 2015, 8:51 pm

blast ! ram!
my head a bunker of bundle rumble
and rustle
a cruel rusted jewel comes
to cancel my candle
my camel is equal parts
gospel and journal
not quite a papal decree
or rabbinical announcement -
hell, come to think of it,
i will announce cement !
hell, some days i'm grateful
for a gravel sandwich
it's hateful what rationals
are up to but i got
zero time for the downward spirals
or the spin of stars
i look about for a meaningful oracle
to help me to the festival
when along comes this
mad visible prodigal
in a '52 chevy unrestored
with a rampant virile case
of terminal virtuality
triumphal & primeval
a particle of colossal lateral motive culture
i stick my thumb out
'cuz bugger all
fun trumps boredom
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Re: Hitchhiker

Post by judih » September 5th, 2015, 10:45 pm

a particle of colossal lateral motive culture

yes, indeed
we await each and every atom clump

thanks, mingo

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Re: Hitchhiker

Post by the mingo » September 5th, 2015, 11:20 pm

you're welcome judih 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Hitchhiker

Post by mtmynd » September 6th, 2015, 12:41 pm

indeed, "fun trumps boredom" and decimates it at both poles.
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Re: Hitchhiker

Post by WIREMAN » September 6th, 2015, 2:22 pm

Announce cement is coming fast enuff....call it "Concrete!" 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Hitchhiker

Post by the mingo » September 6th, 2015, 6:42 pm

Wireman & Cec - you guys are too righteous much - Thx 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Hitchhiker

Post by creativesoul » September 7th, 2015, 2:57 am

great ride!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Hitchhiker

Post by the mingo » September 7th, 2015, 7:51 am

Thx Jana, glad you enjoyed 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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