The Seed
The Seed
the old man told me
as we split wood
of what he saw last night
inside the seed
he began with "do you know..."
i been splitting wood with him
every day for two weeks
& on this last day of this job
he asks me, "do you know..."
we finish the last piece & look at the piles
of split wood now waiting
to be hauled off -
- he finishes telling me too,
of what he saw inside the seed -
we gather up the tools
cover the splitter from rain
pick up our jackets
head out to our homes
when i get to mine
my hound greets me with his howl
i scratch behind his ears
the wife asks me, "Is it finished,
is all the wood cut?"
I answer yes
then i say to her
"hey, do you know ..."
as we split wood
of what he saw last night
inside the seed
he began with "do you know..."
i been splitting wood with him
every day for two weeks
& on this last day of this job
he asks me, "do you know..."
we finish the last piece & look at the piles
of split wood now waiting
to be hauled off -
- he finishes telling me too,
of what he saw inside the seed -
we gather up the tools
cover the splitter from rain
pick up our jackets
head out to our homes
when i get to mine
my hound greets me with his howl
i scratch behind his ears
the wife asks me, "Is it finished,
is all the wood cut?"
I answer yes
then i say to her
"hey, do you know ..."
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: The Seed
can't beat a little mystery for a good yarn, and add an old man's thoughts that he shares while working, and you really got something... 

If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: The Seed
no, don't know
but can imagine
but can imagine
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sure like this- the man seems like a real character- the hound is a nice touch of affection- i can almost smell the wood- what kind? cedar-?mmmmm
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Thx Jana, I've met a host of interesting characters since moving over here to the plateau - my landlord for one - 82 yrs old, made 36 jumps into war in Korea, and he ain't in no nursing home now - the man's a mover and shaker - only one of two ways this kind of guy is going out - either in his sleep or by an act of God - the guy I was cutting wood with he's in his seventies - the wood we cut is hard maple - huge trees whose trunks were cut into sections - we cut up those sections and then cut it down into stove size - it's gonna burn clean & hot the sunlight that's still locked up inside that wood - Thx, Jana 

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sounds incredible! the sunlight is definately in that wood!!!!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: The Seed
Go mingo, keep our imaginations turning.....I love it...... 

me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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