Love of my Life

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saw
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Love of my Life

Post by saw » October 2nd, 2015, 3:36 pm

I spent the evening with Stella Artois
she was very cold to me
just the way I like her

my mouth
was on her nipple
the entire evening

as she poured her heart
into my belly
changing my perceptions



time and again
the big flirt ogled me
with no remorse

and beckoned
my lips, her only promise
the elixir of life

and the Korean woman
at the liquor store
knows we've got something going on
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Love of my Life

Post by judih » October 2nd, 2015, 11:31 pm

to live in a picasso mind
is not as easy as it looks
poetry offers guidelines

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WIREMAN
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Re: Love of my Life

Post by WIREMAN » October 3rd, 2015, 10:55 am

Great Googlie mooglies!!! :lol:
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Love of my Life

Post by Doreen Peri » October 3rd, 2015, 11:08 am

Haha! I love it.

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Re: Love of my Life

Post by creativesoul » October 3rd, 2015, 8:27 pm

love this- very nice glimpse into the late night love of other people- awesome 8)
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Love of my Life

Post by the mingo » October 4th, 2015, 8:47 am

Toast ! Bourbon, please 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Love of my Life

Post by dadio » October 5th, 2015, 6:01 am

I knew her once too. But you have captured so well and just as i recall her. 8)

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