Villanelle: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

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Villanelle: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

Post by theirishsea » October 8th, 2015, 4:31 pm

aba aba aba aba aba abaa.


The monkeys in the trees laugh
Pelt the humans with nuts
The humans kneel before a golden calf

The humans are monkeys by half
Though they live in electric lit huts
The monkeys in the trees laugh

The monkeys scratch their heads at the humans’ craft
at ripping open each other’s mammal guts
The humans kneel before a golden calf

Monkeys don’t understand organized war and graft
They think colonels and artillery shells are nuts
The monkeys in the trees laugh

Monkeys don’t volunteer, hold lotteries or draft
Or risk exposing their smart soft butts
The humans kneel before a golden calf

Monkeys swing free from tree to tree, fore and aft
Humans with tanks and jeeps and feet are stuck in ruts
The monkeys in the trees laugh
The humans kneel before a golden calf
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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Re: Villanelle: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

Post by judih » October 8th, 2015, 10:30 pm

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Re: Villanelle: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

Post by theirishsea » October 8th, 2015, 10:53 pm

Thanks judih
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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Re: Villanelle: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

Post by saw » October 10th, 2015, 10:44 am

the structure of monkeys and men
are intrinsically linked....... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Villanelle: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

Post by justwalt » October 10th, 2015, 6:12 pm

wait (!!!)
I wanna be
a monkey

many is a word

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Re: Villanelle: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

Post by theirishsea » October 10th, 2015, 6:39 pm

justwalt---- :lol:
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Re: Villanelle: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

Post by mnaz » October 10th, 2015, 8:14 pm

I monkey, I machine.

Man, my Bible warned me about worshipping golden calves on the way to the promised land.

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Re: Villanelle: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

Post by the mingo » October 12th, 2015, 8:14 am

yeah but monkeys have yet to invent peanut butter & ya just know raspberry jam is way beyond their reach 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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