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mtmynd
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10,983

Post by mtmynd » November 1st, 2015, 7:14 pm

tiny boxes and deep holes
yesss...they intrigue
such little boxes - what
do they hold, what
treasure, what secret,
for all has not yet
revealed unto you
or
to myself...i grow
still
hard
i find you wrapped
in a beauty that
can be folded neatly
and placed at the
end of our bed
while i mine
the deep hole
made from years
of exploration -
each precious find
fitting into 10,000
9 hundred 80-three
little boxes lining
my comfort of you...
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saw
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Re: 10,983

Post by saw » November 2nd, 2015, 11:15 am

nothing like a good love poem....well done....an homage to the complexities
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: 10,983

Post by the mingo » November 2nd, 2015, 4:22 pm

* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

68degrees
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Re: 10,983

Post by 68degrees » November 2nd, 2015, 10:18 pm

I like a man who is sure about a number.

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Re: 10,983

Post by Tjflowers80 » November 4th, 2015, 2:36 pm

It's like the stitches if a blanket
As I crochet one for him
My heart poured into making it
If only to find myself within.

And wrapped in his charms
I await unfounded bliss
The comfort of his arms
Makes me long for each another kiss.

But alas as he knows
I fear he doesn't know just how much
And as I warp myself willingly to show
I long ever so for his touch.

And like the stitches of that blanket
As I crochet it just for him
With love poured into making it
As my heart beats true within.
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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Re: 10,983

Post by mtmynd » November 10th, 2015, 6:57 pm

many thanks to all the commenters! It surprised me. :)
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