and its over

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Sparrow
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and its over

Post by Sparrow » December 16th, 2015, 3:20 pm

The Love flowed,
from hearts so sweet.
From the void is nothing,
love lives in the street.
I prayed to God,
help me back on my feet,
but it's over.

She said she loved me,
but she did not care.
Her thoughts with me,
she would not share,
And now she sits,
in her liars chair,
but it's over.

True feelings surfaced now,
and dredged my heart,
with hate so cold,
it tore us apart,
the anger and the fear,
thrown like a dart,
but it's over.

My heart can't hate,
my mind won't avoid,
the love that was,
is now destroyed.
Sweet memories remain,
that can not be enjoyed.
And it's over.
"Important encounters are planned by the souls long before the bodies see each other." Paulo Coelho

saw
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Re: and its over

Post by saw » December 17th, 2015, 2:15 pm

very sad....why is there often in one's life, that pain that comes from a place that was once so nurturing ?
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

theirishsea
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Re: and its over

Post by theirishsea » December 17th, 2015, 5:48 pm

The sadness, like the joy, runs deeper this time of year. The poem doesn't reflect the season but I wonder if he season spurred the writing of the poem.

Maybe the only wise (hopefully not wise-guy) thing is to remind you that the still stinging emotional hurts of the present eventually lessen, get better----maybe there will always be a scar but the wound will heal some.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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