digital computer art

[creativesoul]

im in class the mac computers look like horses at the race track
the teacher is here-
the snow brought the quiet waiting people
doing things in a sleepwalking motion
couldn't sleep last night
like a cat in heat
i cannot sleep 4 nights a month

there are things that i think; while sleeping that get me jacked up
disturbing- yet brilliant
yet when i set the intention to help that
it comes out all right
But I cannot sleep
My body rattles and creaks
Bones in my feet broken
When I gettiredlike that
I zombie walk
Now I have a bike
Feet can't take the wear and tear
Portland swallowed by snow
Students like ants filling the streets
My ears rumble artistic thunder
I have been deaf to your voices for some time now
Why can't I have relief from pain without insanity

[saw]

acute observations jana.....and vivid images, so easy for me to see the little black ants against the backdrop of snow as I imagine myself perched in an aerie above the street

really like these lines A LOT :

" I have been deaf to your voices for some time now
Why can't I have relief from pain without insanity"

two poignant lines carved from pieces of the heart........

[leafsailors ghost]

I have a mountain bike ,can relate have made many a midnight ride I agree on the lines , to live in side by side with only echo conversations, yes I know , artistic thunder , yes ,indeed

[creativesoul]

thank you- if i seem a trifle preoccupied- my apologies- i appreciate your feedback

[creativesoul]

Truth be told

[the mingo]

liked the visual piece - your written words made you sound out as a theater of war -
hope you win,

[creativesoul]

I think that each piece is heard or felt by the reader the way it is
I have no war to wage
The day is ahead
Not going to let the energy
Touch me
If it isn't posative

[the mingo]

Ha! That's exactly the attitude Genghis Khan held as he rode forth too !

[creativesoul]

Yay!