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the mingo
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Always

Post by the mingo » February 16th, 2016, 11:55 am

there is always
some need,
some hole,
that waits
to be filled

some dawn
that is coming

some night
following behind
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Always

Post by saw » February 16th, 2016, 2:03 pm

well said....smooth as orange blossom honey.... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Always

Post by leafsailors ghost » February 17th, 2016, 12:16 pm

Always, and now ,are almost the same, as the poem illuminates with a shadow play of words , much appreciated

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Re: Always

Post by the mingo » February 17th, 2016, 2:13 pm

Thx, Gentlemen - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Always

Post by judih » February 17th, 2016, 11:18 pm

if i manage to breathe in
there's a good chance there'll be an exhale to come

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Re: Always

Post by the mingo » February 18th, 2016, 10:55 am

Well then, judih, so far so good ! - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Always

Post by judih » February 18th, 2016, 11:49 am

so it seems!

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Re: Always

Post by creativesoul » February 18th, 2016, 6:13 pm

maybe what is needed is not to think in those terms-is the glass half empty or half full?
there seems to be something good that comes from each strange and odd experience
i mean - GREAT THOUGHTS-- FOR SURE
but i just need to accept things as they are and do my best to change- 8)
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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