wary eyes

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saw
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wary eyes

Post by saw » March 2nd, 2016, 12:05 pm

my mind takes off
like a single leaf in a gust of wind
persistent wisdom
turbulent like agitated poetry

a single dying image
lies in the casket for viewing
pay strict attention, focus
on the hidden truth with folded arms and tarnished jewelry

there is a germinating bean in the three card monte
if you are riveted in your approach
you may actually be witness to a crack in the surface
that sleight of hand cannot conceal
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

leafsailors ghost
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Re: wary eyes

Post by leafsailors ghost » March 2nd, 2016, 12:12 pm

Poet work is real work .word swords are difficult to wield and understand as are word hammers , but, yes after many cuts and sore thumbs , work can indeed be done, history teaches us this, if it teaches us nothing else .cool poem I like the sound of it in my mind>

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dadio
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Re: wary eyes

Post by dadio » March 2nd, 2016, 4:33 pm

I enjoyed the poem. 8)

saw
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Re: wary eyes

Post by saw » March 3rd, 2016, 9:11 am

thanx gents...... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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