It's All About The Message

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Brian mclaughlin
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It's All About The Message

Post by Brian mclaughlin » April 21st, 2016, 5:55 pm

They complain of my punctuation
you see I have none
getting it perfect is so stressful
and I'd rather have fun

then it's my form
you know that rhythm and rhyme
sure sometimes it'll work
but I don't always have time

my speling quite dredful
understood none-the-less
overall about my writing
it's considered a mess

but I really don't care
if the meter don't work
or the grammar ain't proper
and they all go berserk

I'll keep sharing the message
I believe I've been given
if they don't like it SO WHAT
I'm gonna speak long as I'm livin'
When we speak we are afraid our words will not be heard or welcomed. But when we are silent, we are still afraid. So it is better to speak. ~ Audre Lorde

leafsailors ghost
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Re: It's All About The Message

Post by leafsailors ghost » April 21st, 2016, 11:09 pm

Yes sir, you have been true to your word as long as I have known you , many years now and what you say comes from the heart .

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