two dogs, a man, and a woman

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sasha
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two dogs, a man, and a woman

Post by sasha » May 10th, 2016, 4:46 pm

on this first spring day -
this first real spring day -
a chocolate lab and a pretty girl
met me and Kane on the trail
Kane's a handful
he loves people and dogs
and shows his love
by overwhelming them
in a tsunami of affection
so the pretty girl and I
choked up our leashes
and as we did, we talked
"nice day to be out!"
"sure is - what a beautiful dog!"
"thanks, so is yours!"
her smile was real,
her manner warm,
not wary and guarded
as it might be if I were young and muscled
and reeking with musk
alone with her out here
on this remote byway -
she seemed instead
at ease with this old gent
trusting
that he would do no harm
so our words danced properly
without entendre
and after we parted
I replayed the encounter
in chaste fantasy
so unlike those
of my younger days!
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"If one could deduce the nature of the Creator from a study of creation, it would appear that He has an inordinate fondness for beetles." -- evolutionary biologist J B S Haldane, (1892-1964)

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Re: two dogs, a man, and a woman

Post by judih » May 11th, 2016, 3:32 am

but what fantasies might have played out in her mind?
who knows.
But still, it's so refreshing to interact without double entendre!

well-played, Sasha

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Re: two dogs, a man, and a woman

Post by leafsailors ghost » May 11th, 2016, 3:39 pm

Ah but I ,on the other hand, would have dreamed a closer dance ,as I am more the fool I suppose . Enjoyed the poem for its gift of journie.

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