new ku 2016

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 15th, 2016, 1:13 am

after the retreat
ravenous appetite
in small bites

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by the mingo » August 15th, 2016, 9:29 am

mid-august night
kingdom of crickets
and no wind
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 15th, 2016, 10:41 pm

peace
happiness
chia smoothie

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 16th, 2016, 10:56 pm

wake-up
enough lull and stretch
let's attempt standing

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by saw » August 17th, 2016, 8:30 am

saw five deer in the park
they've moved to the city
looking for a better life
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 17th, 2016, 11:55 pm

a better life
a life of more or less?
meanwhile, i ponder

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by the mingo » August 18th, 2016, 12:48 am

gray skies overhead
the world beneath
turning & turning
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by sasha » August 18th, 2016, 10:42 am

o canada
thanks for this respite from
tropical air
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"If one could deduce the nature of the Creator from a study of creation, it would appear that He has an inordinate fondness for beetles." -- evolutionary biologist J B S Haldane, (1892-1964)

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 18th, 2016, 10:39 pm

under full moon
slow walk
crunch of carob pods

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 19th, 2016, 10:43 pm

morning blackness
neighbour silently off to work
before bird signals

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by saw » August 20th, 2016, 8:44 am

the deer and the bird
paid me a visit in the woods
like old school chums
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 20th, 2016, 10:44 pm

past acquaintances
pop-ups in life and dreams
how fragile the self

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 21st, 2016, 10:37 pm

it all feels right
the action, the attitude
lucid dream loop

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 22nd, 2016, 10:48 pm

one lone morning
one fat black slug
and i

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by the mingo » August 23rd, 2016, 7:30 am

many unsearchable things
rising sun does
with shadows

( pared down to its bravest - so many iterations gone through to get to here - simple morning 'ku my ass - to note a single moment in its passing & show its mystery without mentioning it ! If Basho and all the rest of that gang were still alive I would find them & smash their skulls in with a hammer for being such great troublemakers )

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