there is truth in summer

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saw
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there is truth in summer

Post by saw » August 19th, 2016, 9:18 am

if it weren't for the scalding breeze
I'd have already melted into a pool
of liquid molecules, I mean it was
fucking hot....
having said that I couldn't stand
to be in the house another fraction...
out There was real brother
no mistaking humidity for privilege
I guess sometimes I just need to know
how much I can still put up with,
little tests to smash the personal atoms

Mick is crooning about this midnight rambler
his voice in my earbud like a velvet brick oven
so I turn the dial to high crimes, boosted bass,
wait for Keith's twang of treble justice
to kick me in the head...
Mick says he's gonna smash all my
plate glass windows, put a fist through
my steel plated doors....and I believe him
this is summer baby, and it's fucking hot
there is nothing to mistake here in the urban jungle
the predator sun has razor sharp tentacles

to wrap you up like a human burrito with lots of habanero
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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WIREMAN
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Re: there is truth in summer

Post by WIREMAN » August 19th, 2016, 11:57 am

hot...hot....hot.... 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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the mingo
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Re: there is truth in summer

Post by the mingo » August 19th, 2016, 6:15 pm

* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: there is truth in summer

Post by stilltrucking » August 19th, 2016, 6:44 pm

8)
loved this bit especially
no mistaking humidity for privilege

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sasha
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Re: there is truth in summer

Post by sasha » August 20th, 2016, 4:03 pm

these truths
and more...
like the fact that
wild blackberries fight back
the best ones hide
under leaves
and hornets like them too.
try not to chew the fruits
but mash them instead
with your tongue
and accept the fact that
despite your efforts
bugs and stems
will get eaten
:wink:
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"If one could deduce the nature of the Creator from a study of creation, it would appear that He has an inordinate fondness for beetles." -- evolutionary biologist J B S Haldane, (1892-1964)

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Re: there is truth in summer

Post by creativesoul » August 23rd, 2016, 11:42 am

And what if summer could speak?
What would she say?
Ah water is sacred
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: there is truth in summer

Post by 68degrees » August 28th, 2016, 11:19 am

the truth is summer
more so than the cold is hate
live in both wisely

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