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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 28th, 2016, 11:39 pm

a gentle nudge
come on mind
flow, goddamn it

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by saw » August 29th, 2016, 9:25 am

dean martin said it
ain't that a kick in the head
thanks, now I remember
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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 29th, 2016, 10:41 pm

a huge gathering
clowns and stages
they hand you the mic

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by the mingo » August 29th, 2016, 11:28 pm

happy
Birthday
judih
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Re: new ku 2016

Post by saw » August 30th, 2016, 9:06 am

birthday you say
well I'll be damned
j-u-d-i-h
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Re: new ku 2016

Post by the mingo » August 30th, 2016, 10:06 am

one wall
one bird's shadow
there
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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 30th, 2016, 9:58 pm

for one day
older
then free to regress

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by saw » August 30th, 2016, 11:00 pm

dance on a crater
moon pies for the guests
another day has gone
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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » August 31st, 2016, 10:42 pm

teeter on heels
stiletto madness
acrobat wardrobe

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by the mingo » September 1st, 2016, 7:54 am

turn it up
turn it all the way up
let it blow
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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » September 1st, 2016, 11:24 pm

turn around
there behind you
surprise yesterday

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by saw » September 2nd, 2016, 8:29 am

you can't have yesterday
today insists upon it
tomorrow is a concept
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Re: new ku 2016

Post by the mingo » September 2nd, 2016, 10:24 am

under umbrellas
two men passing
one raises his arm
in greeting
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Re: new ku 2016

Post by judih » September 2nd, 2016, 11:03 pm

tales of shine and bliss
fiction or reality
pick your preference

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Re: new ku 2016

Post by sweetwater » September 3rd, 2016, 8:13 am

The haiku is a Japanese verse in three lines. Line one has 5 syllables, line 2 has 7 syllables and line three has 5 syllables. Haiku is a mood poem and it doesn't use any metaphors or similes.

amusing to say
in the haiku realm of things
a change in context

haiku is haiku
enjoying itself as art
the presence of mood

metaphor and verse
a simile with no home
being in context

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