When You Left this Morning

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68degrees
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When You Left this Morning

Post by 68degrees » August 30th, 2016, 9:31 pm

Maybe you made coffee,
maybe you left a note.

I can only imagine the warmth
of your hand as you closed the door.

There was no need for words,
best things are left unsaid.

saw
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Re: When You Left this Morning

Post by saw » August 30th, 2016, 10:00 pm

superb....a joy to my eyes.....and brain... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: When You Left this Morning

Post by leafsailors ghost » August 31st, 2016, 8:02 am

Interesting how a flood of memories came with this tide of a few simple words . The warmth of her hand . yes. so what is this show not tell bullshit they always harp on? I laughed when I tHOUGHT ABOUT THAT NONSENCE QUESTION ASKED ABOUT A POEM.
DID MY HEART HEAR THE WORDS?
ANSWER YES

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Re: When You Left this Morning

Post by the mingo » September 1st, 2016, 9:00 am

missed this yesterday - but what would have today have been without it ? Thx, 68 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: When You Left this Morning

Post by 68degrees » September 1st, 2016, 9:10 pm

saw wrote:superb....a joy to my eyes.....and brain... 8)

Been married over 30 years. She's still my bride.

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Re: When You Left this Morning

Post by 68degrees » September 1st, 2016, 9:12 pm

leafsailors ghost wrote:Interesting how a flood of memories came with this tide of a few simple words . The warmth of her hand . yes. so what is this show not tell bullshit they always harp on? I laughed when I tHOUGHT ABOUT THAT NONSENCE QUESTION ASKED ABOUT A POEM.
DID MY HEART HEAR THE WORDS?
ANSWER YES
Depends on what's showing and telling sometimes ;) But you're right...most of it is BS. Just write.

Glad it's talking to ya'

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Re: When You Left this Morning

Post by saw » September 1st, 2016, 9:13 pm

68.... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: When You Left this Morning

Post by 68degrees » September 1st, 2016, 9:13 pm

the mingo wrote:missed this yesterday - but what would have today have been without it ? Thx, 68 8)
Say hi to everyone at AT for me. Tell 'em I miss 'em ;)

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