a sheet of ice

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sweetwater
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a sheet of ice

Post by sweetwater » September 1st, 2016, 6:40 pm

ambition and telling grandma a story
about dreams and the accomplishments
of time

how it relates to the idea of oneself
to move as if graceful
in figures of eight

skating in the dreams of delphi
the heights of mankind

as if to express
a life of meaning in the absence
of the 'seeming' metaphor

and emotional goo

syntax relates the cryptic
to the bias of becoming

telling of where you are
where you have been

and why poetry is not poetry
but something else

some other lament
or idea

something

...

trouba winnipeg - lwing d - x
rasmus andersson calgary rwing d - fw
marcus granland vancouver - center -fw
Dmitry Zhukenov vancouver - c -fw
Guillaume Brisebois vancouver dman - fw
Anton Gustafsson washington - center -fw
Jonas Siegenthaler washington -lwing d -fw
Julius Bergman san jose rwing d -x
Jayce Hawryluk florida c -x
Mattias Janmark-Nylen - detroit c -x
Oskar Sundqvist - pittsburgh c fw
Jacob De La Rose - montreal c fw
Noah Juulsen montreal d -x

Vladislav Namestnikov tampa bay -c fw
Slater Koekkoek tampa bay d -fw

Ivan Barbashev st louis c - fw/x
Jordan Schmaltz st louis - rd -fw

Jamie Oleksiak dallas - ld -fw
Jason Dickinson dallas - c fw
Radek Faksa dallas -lc -fw

cody payne - boston rc - fw
Alexander Khokhlachev - boston lc - fw

Nick Baptiste buffalo rc -fw

Nikita Zadorov colorado ld -fw

Mark McNeill chicago rc -fw

Scott Mayfield ny island rd fw
Ville Pokka ny island rd - fw

goalie prospects -
Mackenzie Blackwood nj
carter hart philadelphia

Henrik Samuelsson - arizona rc-fw
Laurent Dauphin - arizona lw -fw

Blake Siebenaler columbus rd -fw

...

it is as if ... it is in
the wrong era

something previous
or yet to be ...

names dates
oblivious now
ranting not really

but as you wish

here it is !!!!

leafsailors ghost
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Re: a sheet of ice

Post by leafsailors ghost » September 1st, 2016, 11:01 pm

Delphi |ˈdelˌfī|
One of the most important religious sanctuaries of the ancient Greek world, dedicated to Apollo, situated on the lower southern slopes of Mount Parnassus above the Gulf of Corinth. Thought of as the navel of the earth, it was the seat of the Delphic Oracle, whose riddling responses to a wide range of questions were delivered by the Pythia.

Interesting poem. As a southern boy ,who could now care less about football ,thinking about maybe a hockey team in a poem?. Made me think of when football was so mysteriously wonderful for us , my son was a kicker , a good one in high school , the moon was full on a Friday night , the world was perfect , he won the game at the last moment ,we all were just so wonderfully ,innocently, happy, .I think I got the poem, if not then I will say it did get me . Smile, thanks .

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