Iceman cum lawdy mama

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saw
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Iceman cum lawdy mama

Post by saw » August 30th, 2016, 10:45 pm

ice for my tormented shoulder,
a few irregular cubes in my stiff manhattan
Frozen Water is a perk
of the affluent

a creature comfort
for the civilized man that has everything,
and not a half bad band name come to think of it.
I don't need more neckties

my underwear is fine and yellow
I pay the electric bill,
dream scenario for the king
of the block

I numb my swelling joints,
I quench my thirst
for another month and just before
the-first is upon me again

I pray the Iceman cometh
or at least a surrogate like Eugene O'Neill
or better yet, how about Harry Hope,
the proprietor of the saloon

'cause
he had a propensity
to give away some free drinks....
to the down and out
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

leafsailors ghost
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Re: Iceman cum lawdy mama

Post by leafsailors ghost » September 1st, 2016, 11:09 pm

Many blessing will come to him! Harry hope is always the last angel to be left standing as the day breaks over the unloved poets who have no remorse ,nor a thin dime between them.I always appreciated a good piece of ice ,when the weather was hot . The title of the poem is in neon above the door , so let us have one on the house ,poet.

saw
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Re: Iceman cum lawdy mama

Post by saw » September 2nd, 2016, 7:59 am

thanx leaf...enjoyed your thoughtful response... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

68degrees
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Re: Iceman cum lawdy mama

Post by 68degrees » September 4th, 2016, 11:19 am

I love a good Manhattan. Had three of them a couple of weeks ago. Was lost for the evening.

"Frozen water is a perk for the affluent" Ain't that the truth...

Title made me read this. Am glad I did.

68degrees

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