Kill Song

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sasha
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Kill Song

Post by sasha » September 2nd, 2016, 4:50 pm

"whoa, bro,"
his eyes seem to say
"do you hear that?"
then he looks away from me
back to the woods
his tail erect
nose high in the air
indeed I hear it
the pack
coyotes
in the not-too distance
celebrating a kill
a rabbit, maybe
a fox, maybe
a house cat, maybe
and I think
"you're more their bro
than mine,
bro"
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"If one could deduce the nature of the Creator from a study of creation, it would appear that He has an inordinate fondness for beetles." -- evolutionary biologist J B S Haldane, (1892-1964)

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Re: Kill Song

Post by the mingo » September 2nd, 2016, 10:52 pm

* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Kill Song

Post by saw » September 3rd, 2016, 8:40 am

reminds me of the joke when the Lone Ranger and Tonto are surrounded by hostile Indians and the Lone Ranger says, "We are in trouble Tonto! "...and Tonto replies, "What you mean WE Kemosabe?"

You have to wonder what kind of tug the dog feels in his soul
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Kill Song

Post by leafsailors ghost » September 6th, 2016, 12:09 am

I like the poem and I understand the thinking but it made me think about all the people I know who hunt and the folks I read about who kill all sorts of things just to do it, are we as critters any differnt really? , just thinking

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Re: Kill Song

Post by sasha » September 6th, 2016, 4:40 pm

leafsailors ghost wrote:I like the poem and I understand the thinking but it made me think about all the people I know who hunt and the folks I read about who kill all sorts of things just to do it, are we as critters any differnt really? , just thinking
Predation is older than any of us, and transcends all morality - it's simply a naturally occurring strategy for survival. I'm one of the few people in my neighborhood who doesn't hunt, but I totally support the wishes of neighbors who do.

The poem was meant to be about the more literal genetic brotherhood my housemate shares with the wild canines - but yours is an interesting interpretation I hadn't considered.
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"If one could deduce the nature of the Creator from a study of creation, it would appear that He has an inordinate fondness for beetles." -- evolutionary biologist J B S Haldane, (1892-1964)

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