And Let the Time Be Now

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And Let the Time Be Now

Post by 68degrees » September 11th, 2016, 11:19 pm

**Have edited this poem. This is the "new" version:

It is the danger of kisses
which keeps us close;
after they end, there might
be nowhere to go.
You see, I will lose you
eventually; it is written
in this poem we shall pass
at different times.
September is telling me this,
shaking its leaves in my face
before they fall.
Sometimes I measure my life,
just waiting to see you again.
Last edited by 68degrees on September 12th, 2016, 10:36 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Prophesy

Post by sasha » September 12th, 2016, 6:43 am

the truth of this has been much on my mind lately...
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Re: Prophesy

Post by judih » September 12th, 2016, 10:23 pm

everything passes
this response
to your response

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Re: Prophesy

Post by 68degrees » September 12th, 2016, 10:39 pm

sasha wrote:the truth of this has been much on my mind lately...
I did change this up a bit. But it's still the truth, at least as I know it.

Thanks for commenting.

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Re: Prophesy

Post by 68degrees » September 12th, 2016, 10:41 pm

judih wrote:everything passes
this response
to your response
Interesting response. Have no clue what it means, but it sounds delightful. Thanks.

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Re: And Let the Time Be Now

Post by saw » September 13th, 2016, 9:28 am

wonderful poem.....palpable loss dressed up into artistic expression....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: And Let the Time Be Now

Post by Tjflowers80 » September 15th, 2016, 7:44 pm

time graces us with each a different cast
The stars align showing us that even she changes
Autum arrives leaving summer past
And the world rearranges.

Though kisses may keep you close
And though rough times may be ahead
The places we create are where we can go
And warmth from daylight keeps in heartaches stead.

I absolutely love this! Great writings comes from a great mind. I love your style
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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Re: And Let the Time Be Now

Post by 68degrees » September 16th, 2016, 9:10 pm

Tjflowers80 wrote:time graces us with each a different cast
The stars align showing us that even she changes
Autum arrives leaving summer past
And the world rearranges.

Though kisses may keep you close
And though rough times may be ahead
The places we create are where we can go
And warmth from daylight keeps in heartaches stead.

I absolutely love this! Great writings comes from a great mind. I love your style
Thanks. I like what's here also.

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Re: And Let the Time Be Now

Post by Tjflowers80 » September 17th, 2016, 1:12 am

You inspired me. You write so beautifully. I have forgotten how much I love the written word. Thank you.
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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