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justwalt
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dreamality

Post by justwalt » December 8th, 2016, 2:54 pm

belief presumed
of love, of life
and of light
drawn to chase,
the noble encounter,
the noble cause
of selfless deed

to charge direct,
the yet unknown,
or the imminent
by faith alone
in the just,
in the pure,
is only worth it all

in grief, consumed,
in pain, in sin
and insane,
last in the race
to find forever,
to find a realm
all her very own

allowed to waste,
in sorrow and shame,
stripped of feeling
and cast in chain,
by human haste,
by human flaw
is not a world at all

relief assumed,
with sight, with sound
and with sense,
as dawn breaks away
the disturbing dream,
the dark of day
to reveal the wheel

the wheel, earth,
turned west to east,
brings good with bad
brings joy with pain,
necessary but not sad,
to give its balance
of wisdom to all

wgs/93
many is a word

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Re: dreamality

Post by dadio » December 9th, 2016, 4:41 am

Good poem & theme. 8)

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Re: dreamality

Post by justwalt » December 9th, 2016, 9:09 am

thanks dadio, found this among some
papers in the basement, from '93

many is a word

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Re: dreamality

Post by mtmynd » December 10th, 2016, 10:13 am

very good piece you wove together all those years ago.
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Re: dreamality

Post by justwalt » December 10th, 2016, 1:32 pm

I just found it t'other day.

It was a dream, that evades me now.
Written in prison, in the ninth year of ten.

Looks to be a disturbing dream, one that
wakes me. Either profoundly negative or
positive, they both would wake me, and
seems to mirror my Ex... Michelle, mother
of our two children in the early eighty's.

thanks mtmynd

many is a word

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Re: dreamality

Post by creativesoul » December 21st, 2016, 10:59 am

The wheels of time
And no time like the present
Not feeling the criminal element
I feel a more desperate need for clarity
Writing is such a vague fog on occasion
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: dreamality

Post by saw » December 21st, 2016, 1:20 pm

powerful resurrection...the words are history, they are a part of you....cool you found them
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: dreamality

Post by justwalt » December 23rd, 2016, 12:05 am



thank you friends,

memories... tells us where we are today.
seems like yesterday... feels like tomorrow.
it wanted to be found again, even needed...
for this moment, for me, for you, forever.






many is a word

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