Winter of '66

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the mingo
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Winter of '66

Post by the mingo » December 12th, 2016, 7:52 am

Shit, it's Sunday,
thought there was gonna be a problem with the hose
amounted to just a bit of leakage no serious cracks
- winter is more than a bitch if you have serious cracks -
once I patched a serious crack with a piece of David Bowie's "Golden Years",
right where it went " in the back of a dream car 20 feet long"
was this spot that just hummed ya know?
and it worked ! did it up and got out of there just before
the Wendigo showed up singing slave to love I said may I have this dance look at all the snow
music helps though it's not a cure for anything storm as we held hands across dreams
you wanted to talk about the river,
I didn't
so we settled on a murderer's tale a long way from its mother
the dog kept barking at the door
in those days before texting
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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justwalt
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Re: Winter of '66

Post by justwalt » December 13th, 2016, 1:10 am

wish upon wish upon day upon day

I believe...
I believe!
many is a word

saw
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Re: Winter of '66

Post by saw » December 21st, 2016, 1:17 pm

those serious cracks demand your attention.... 8) 8) 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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