Last Night Well Done

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the mingo
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Last Night Well Done

Post by the mingo » June 22nd, 2017, 9:27 am

12:03 a.m. - jazz from the dead
no name men
moon walking women

one man listening got lost in his mind
another got chills from the piano
a third named his daughter
from the song's title

... passing rain
river made high from it ...

a woman named Ross said,
"the theme is not easy"
but many never heard this news

it was just a small
moment
in a corner of time

but who could ask for more ?
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: Last Night Well Done

Post by saw » June 25th, 2017, 11:19 am

it was just a small
moment
in a corner of time

amazing how profound that can be.... 8)
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Re: Last Night Well Done

Post by the mingo » June 25th, 2017, 12:50 pm

Thx, saw and I agree about the amazing 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: Last Night Well Done

Post by dadio » June 26th, 2017, 4:08 am

Well done. 8)
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Re: Last Night Well Done

Post by the mingo » June 27th, 2017, 7:23 pm

Thx, Terry, appreciate it 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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