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how do i want to be heard

Post by Whitebird Sings » April 30th, 2005, 8:50 am

i want to speak softly
and know the person who will stop to hear me whisper

that is the one that i want to spend time with

you?

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Post by mousey1 » May 10th, 2005, 10:15 am

I want to be heard

Without uttering a word

Not a whisper

Not a sound

Just heard

Really heard

If only

For

a

Moment
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by judih » May 10th, 2005, 10:19 am

i want to be
with one who is
and together we'll listen

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Post by Whitebird Sings » May 10th, 2005, 5:15 pm

uh-huh,
and do you know what else?

i want to shout at the top of my lungs
and know the person who will stop to listen

that is another one that i want to spend time with

or maybe it's the same one

you?

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Post by panta rhei » May 11th, 2005, 3:18 am

if we can listen together
and shout together
without feeling lonely
or ashamed

then it's you

you

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Post by mousey1 » May 12th, 2005, 12:05 pm

"I've never made love." she said
So matter-of-factly
"I have never made love
And before I die
I would love to."

Time swept by
And she along with it
She watched and waited
On that fast train to nowhere
Never alone, always alone

Come hither eyes
Locked behind
A solid door
Of indifference and regret
Come hither eyes blind

And looking at you
She could almost see
Something
Someone
To make love to
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by mousey1 » May 13th, 2005, 12:22 pm

And the voice falls

On deaf ears

Echoes off the walls

Of an empty room

Never

to

be

heard

As soft as a breath

It falls

Listen
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by Whitebird Sings » May 13th, 2005, 8:08 pm

she thinks there is no one listening
but
there are many reasons for the quiet

say, for example

there is he
who has fallen in love with her smile
wondering, "what words will make her mine"
afraid to mis-speak - for fear of losing her
and so says nothing

there is she
wanting him totally
as much as he wants her
and she also afraid...
and so says nothing

both seeming indifferent to the other
when inside they long for the others touch

quiet, so quiet

no deaf ears here
only the silence
of two people afraid that the other
won't love them

waiting for the other
to make the first move

watching and waiting
time sweeps by

unless...

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Post by Whitebird Sings » May 14th, 2005, 5:57 pm

unless mousey... unless!

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Post by mousey1 » May 14th, 2005, 7:47 pm

And time sweeps by

Taking with it

The ash and dust

Of cremated lives
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by Glorious Amok » May 15th, 2005, 2:20 am

i want to be heard singing, and told that i'm in key. i want someone who hears the melody of me, who harmonizes with my high C. i want to make music, with the vibrating of our chords, the strumming of our strings, and the beating of our skins. i want to be heard in music. i want to be grooved to, i want someone who feels this bio-rhythm.
"YOUR way is your only way." - jack kerouac

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Post by Whitebird Sings » May 15th, 2005, 3:43 pm

time sweeping

ash and dust

so it is
as it should be --
as long as
those lives
have been lived...
completely
that is,

out loud --

say in a
vibrating
strumming
beating
melody
harmonizing
in high C
sort of way

groovin' . . . on a Sunday afternoon

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Post by jimboloco » May 23rd, 2005, 2:03 pm

a song and dance routine
yeah! i'd like to be
a part of that, someone
to coach aand we could learn and yeah!
strut and sing, what a real gas!
Image
zen sweeping backyard patio
dirty treez shed florita bluez
sweep leaves, take out garbage!
but with pizazz! yeah!
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by mousey1 » May 29th, 2005, 1:00 pm

I want to be heard

Listening

How absurd

Listening

To be heard
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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