I Think We Should Shoot

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I Think We Should Shoot

Post by the mingo » July 23rd, 2017, 2:07 pm

every Australian man, woman, and child
who comes here for whatever reason
and calls 9-1-1 to report suspicious activity
after all, this is America
and we are being great again
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: I Think We Should Shoot

Post by mnaz » July 23rd, 2017, 2:59 pm

... suspicious activity like perhaps folks wandering around with guns looking for people to shoot if they call 911?

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Post by the mingo » July 23rd, 2017, 3:19 pm

yeah, just like that but there is something deeper needs to be addressed - we traded our mythic ideals for the images of dead presidents and here we are
wondering what the hell we thought that would get us - there is a sickness, a disease, trying to deracinate the roots -
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: I Think We Should Shoot

Post by mnaz » July 23rd, 2017, 3:31 pm

The corporate beast... Money is God. Even hippies fell for it. Rappers took it up, but the Machine had to thin 'em out. Sometimes it's the guys wearing 911 who shoot.
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Re: I Think We Should Shoot

Post by the mingo » July 23rd, 2017, 3:38 pm

They all been a tad trigger happy the past ten yrs -
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: I Think We Should Shoot

Post by mnaz » July 23rd, 2017, 3:43 pm

It's just war, that's all. We love our wars. Even slaughtered hundreds of thousands of ourselves at one point to make sure we were united.

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Re: I Think We Should Shoot

Post by sasha » July 23rd, 2017, 4:36 pm

War is great. War is good. War greases the wheels of commerce, fattens the portfolios of the arms merchants and manufacturers of body bags. It's all about profit, Baby. The Murrican way. Best not to let the Trumpeters hear your treasonous, bleeding-heart whining, lest you find yourself at the wrong end of a 9mm.
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Re: I Think We Should Shoot

Post by mnaz » July 23rd, 2017, 8:56 pm

Shoot first, as the proverb says...

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Re: I Think We Should Shoot

Post by wylde » July 24th, 2017, 5:34 am

"The war is not meant to be won, it is meant to be continuous."

-George Orwell
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Re: I Think We Should Shoot

Post by leafsailors ghost » July 24th, 2017, 6:54 am

I love the total irony of the poem. where are the gun lovers commentary on this one? (I see " guns save lives ,maybe yours" bullshit bumper stickerI see down here all the time.) The truth is we have a bunch of really insecure men who need something in their pocket to make them feel manly. The NRA are not really accountable for a culture of fear. how about that fool in Texas shot up the utility repair trucks just because " he sort of lost it" Every one I know personally that is into guns in a big way are unstable and paranoid , they will tell you differnt but they are always thinking about that hero moment when it will all come true and they need to finally use that beloved gun, oh how I wish they loved a harmonica instead. How can some one shoot some one they can not even see? You will notice that the NRA has had nothing to say about this.
I can not comprehend how sad this must be for the people who loved this woman .A fine sharp poem.

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Re: I Think We Should Shoot

Post by mnaz » July 26th, 2017, 12:23 am

Nothing wrong with guns. Fingers maybe, but you can't put that on steel..

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Re: I Think We Should Shoot

Post by the mingo » July 26th, 2017, 1:14 am

To everyone who responded - Thx, folks
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: I Think We Should Shoot

Post by WIREMAN » July 26th, 2017, 4:53 pm

aboriginal patterns transplanted to the Wild Wild West😎
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: I Think We Should Shoot

Post by wylde » July 27th, 2017, 5:05 am

...with no sheriffs to marshal
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