Lovesick

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creativesoul
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Lovesick

Post by creativesoul » August 13th, 2017, 4:06 pm

I see that word on autofill when I write the word Hollywood
There is such a sadness about not being a polished stone
So raw- I want to smoke I want to eat
Truth is I dunno what I need
I just want to grab something to fill me
So empty right now
Tears fall
I fear not knowing love today
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Lovesick

Post by mnaz » August 13th, 2017, 9:52 pm

Desert emptiness has spiritual power, but you're right, it only goes so far..

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Re: Lovesick

Post by creativesoul » August 13th, 2017, 11:56 pm

True- and palm trees discuss winds of change
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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