Why would it be any different than it was before?

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Why would it be any different than it was before?

Post by Doreen Peri » October 6th, 2017, 11:16 pm

Why would it be any different than it was before?
Why? Makes no sense. This is the present tense
not the past. Nothing lasts forever or even lasts
a month sometimes. Crimes are committed every single
fucking day and I don't want to get in the way of them any more
and so why would this be any different than before?
It's obvious, apparently.
Some might be so scared of me
they can't proceed. I guess.
But any other conclusion needs to be put to rest.
Why would it be any different than it was before?
I implore you. Please answer. What the fuck am I doing this for?

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Re: Why would it be any different than it was before?

Post by judih » October 7th, 2017, 12:27 am

because you feel you need to speak up

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Post by creativesoul » October 7th, 2017, 2:22 am

I have been encouraged
With what feels like divine beauty
Of all the places filled with light
Opening the heart and trusting
Instead of thrusting my needs upon
The often very sketchy unwilling romance story
Of two people loving each other

No one ever used to talk about taking the fun- out of dysfunctional-
ice cream
Belongs to the tongue
All the bells are rung
Chose what is more important
Under the beautiful sun
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by creativesoul » October 7th, 2017, 2:25 am

And the road twisted and turned
She kept looking at the window
Like a cat with those eyes
That saw everything
And was blind to the things she chose not to see
How free do you want to be?
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by creativesoul » October 7th, 2017, 2:27 am

Up ahead was the general store.. walking on the road of sand and cactus- view of
Coachella valley glistens below
She had been there
A thousand times before
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Why would it be any different than it was before?

Post by saw » October 7th, 2017, 8:39 am

flying solo
so low
the radar can't see me
I glide in and out
of connections
like a bat zooming
through an electric fan
some say
did I see what I thought
I saw
perceptions
same as reality
truth
ambiguous at best
write
write write
right ?
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by creativesoul » October 7th, 2017, 10:51 am

Write!!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by creativesoul » October 7th, 2017, 10:53 am

Really love your groove
Not watching the tube as long as I can
Decided that I can write
Walk or bike- tired of the trite
Hot water
Sweet sunlight
Nothing better than tonight
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by Doreen Peri » October 7th, 2017, 11:00 pm

Thanks, Judih... Yeah, I guess I needed to say something.

Thanks for the repartee ... Jana ... and Steve

I don't even know what this poem of mine means. I don't remember writing it. Sigh.

Dementia? Maybe. Or way too much weed.

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Re: Why would it be any different than it was before?

Post by judih » October 7th, 2017, 11:09 pm

doesn't matter why
the 'what' is fruit from the tree

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Post by Doreen Peri » October 7th, 2017, 11:22 pm

Judih ... well I guess maybe the "what" worked on some level as the fruit fell off the tree since I got your response and also poems in reply. That's pretty darn cool! Thank you!!!!!

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Post by WIREMAN » October 8th, 2017, 12:36 am

Seasons change
October summer
September autumn
The plum white
with snow in winter
Fresh is the smell
of spring
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by mtmynd » October 8th, 2017, 4:22 pm

Re: "Why would it be any different than it was before?
I implore you. Please answer. What the fuck am I doing this for?"


An answer is never more powerful than the actual act that spurned it.
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Re: Why would it be any different than it was before?

Post by creativesoul » October 9th, 2017, 12:54 am

Why are you?
What is your motive?
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Why would it be any different than it was before?

Post by stilltrucking » October 9th, 2017, 4:25 am

Doreen wrote:
I implore you. Please answer. What the fuck am I doing this for?

For the banana flavored pellets?
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