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Work Zone

Post by the mingo » November 14th, 2017, 11:13 pm

I just nailed
an adjective to a noun
and glued them to a verb /

I brought some comma's in too but didn't need them after deciding to put a window up instead. Trying to get the place sealed in before winter. That may already be too late.

I know the place is a mess but I'll get the construction site cleaned up when I'm done.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Work Zone

Post by mnaz » November 15th, 2017, 5:18 am

It's only November.. Still might be some time..
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Re: Work Zone

Post by creativesoul » November 15th, 2017, 9:07 am

Mmmm scorpions 🦂 everywhere’s
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Work Zone

Post by saw » November 15th, 2017, 10:54 am

on Tug Hill
you gotta be ready
for the old man
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Work Zone

Post by the mingo » November 16th, 2017, 11:55 am

mnaz wrote:
November 15th, 2017, 5:18 am
It's only November.. Still might be some time..
might be and might not, Mark - they'll be time enough for sitting for sure, last yr caught me short - don't want to go through that again -
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Work Zone

Post by the mingo » November 16th, 2017, 11:57 am

creativesoul wrote:
November 15th, 2017, 9:07 am
Mmmm scorpions 🦂 everywhere’s
Scorpions ? OMG ! Where the hell are ya ? You on a horse in a desert somewhere ?? What I tell you 'bout that hippy shit ! 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Work Zone

Post by the mingo » November 16th, 2017, 11:59 am

saw wrote:
November 15th, 2017, 10:54 am
on Tug Hill
you gotta be ready
for the old man
... and that ain't no lie, saw - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Work Zone

Post by creativesoul » November 25th, 2017, 3:46 am

Yes there are so many rocks
Lizards 🦎
Reptile feet after all the heat
The ticking of the soul like clock
Somewhere the smell of sweet
Rolls out some kind of treat
Snakes and shedding skins
Rattling in the wind tumbleweeds and roadrunners
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Work Zone

Post by the mingo » November 25th, 2017, 5:28 pm

Not the rain forest I take it -
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Work Zone

Post by creativesoul » November 25th, 2017, 6:34 pm

Nature
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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