Deeper

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the mingo
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Deeper

Post by the mingo » November 22nd, 2017, 4:43 am

deeper than childhood
deeper than adolescence
deeper than the stages of adulthood
age carves itself
upon us
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Deeper

Post by WIREMAN » November 22nd, 2017, 1:24 pm

Deeper and deeper, like all that becomes.......
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Deeper

Post by the mingo » November 22nd, 2017, 5:56 pm

Thx, Wireman 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Deeper

Post by judih » November 22nd, 2017, 11:23 pm

blinder and blinder
my eyes marvel at how deep i once was
yet barely see me now

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Re: Deeper

Post by mnaz » November 23rd, 2017, 6:22 am

Truth.

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