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she said

Post by saw » December 24th, 2017, 12:34 pm

she said
can you sanitize it for me
I've had more than enough
germs
in my life,
and each time
I told myself
this guy will be
different, but
I always ended up
with a bad infection, so
could you please
not lie to me
could you please not
betray me
could you please
just be real, and
it wasn't the first time
I'd heard this story
us old men
can expect these tales,
the longer you live
the more the themes repeat
and the more
one yearns for the truth
and I could definitely relate
to it.....
as if the story was my own
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: she said

Post by creativesoul » December 25th, 2017, 9:46 am

I guess I thought that
Those stories were exaggerated emotional needs
That upon closer examination
It was discovered
That the difficult person in the relationship was me
Oh that broke my heart
Complaining about the past lovers
Only eventually leads to
I wanted more
Than they could give
No infection there
Just a real change in perspective
Although it might have been nice to have the honeymoon relationship
I think that may be far fetched
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: she said

Post by saw » December 27th, 2017, 1:17 pm

monogamy monogamy
is it just a trap...are we
all just marks....pawns in a game
that is rigged, much to ponder
in the relationship game
everyone has their unique takeaway..........
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by sasha » December 27th, 2017, 5:19 pm

I'm done with that shit
the love-rush
ain't worth the agony of withdrawal
the black sense of loss
the self-recriminations
what if
what did I do
why did she leave
no more
the scar tissue's a little thick
but it's holding
.
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Re: she said

Post by creativesoul » December 28th, 2017, 7:33 am

I love everyone
No one
And co habitation is so over rated-
I love you all
I want to go home and sleep
All that love keeps me awake all night
Love and light
Yes I love ❤️
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: she said

Post by saw » December 28th, 2017, 1:55 pm

he said, she said
it's all been said
communication can be a raging MF
we are sent into the world naked
naive and full of shit
and we do our best to make things work
and we ply our "trades"
"ain't no good guys, ain't no bad guys,
only you and me, and we just disagree "

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b2ff8qXa248
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Re: she said

Post by creativesoul » December 29th, 2017, 9:17 am

Love songs
The break up tunes
And the favorite tunes of someone you loved
Love s music never stops playing
Not always sure I want to listen
So bossy and intense
Dominated by hormonal desires
Maybe it’s lust
Gotta wonder
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by sasha » December 29th, 2017, 11:08 am

my no-play list
...
can't take my eyes off you
if
love shack
turn the page
super woman
friends
.
.
.
sweet poison
think I've finally
kicked the habit
.
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Re: she said

Post by mnaz » December 31st, 2017, 3:36 pm

Silly love songs ain't going anywhere. They got apartments and little cosmic watering holes everywhere..

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Re: she said

Post by Arcadia » December 31st, 2017, 5:34 pm

see the titles in this Herbie Hancock´s album... the nightmare of romanticism haha...!!! love it!!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7odSLrcE6sw

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