It felt like a video

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Arcadia
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It felt like a video

Post by Arcadia » January 28th, 2018, 7:08 pm

at the heart of the square
the skyline
is ducks & bats
evolving together with the storm

green grass calling for other games

evocation
memory unfolding
like a Lou Reed mirror
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Re: It felt like a video

Post by mnaz » January 30th, 2018, 6:58 am

Ducks and bats evolving together with the storm. And Lou Reed. I'm finding this a little enigmatic on the green grass..
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Re: It felt like a video

Post by Arcadia » January 30th, 2018, 6:43 pm

Gracias for reading!. Out of field effects plus the experience of seeing an Adam Curtis documentary with a bunch of people while in the sky another film seemed to be proyected at the same time... just to put some context! :lol: 8)
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Re: It felt like a video

Post by the mingo » January 31st, 2018, 5:02 am

evocation
memory unfolding
like a Lou Reed mirror
Enjoyed, Veronica 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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